This was so good. Loved the way the different perspectives built up the imagery, and there was a subtext in the tonal shift of host that left me with genuine chills.
Fantastic! I love found footage. Mata, you did a great job capturing the reviews. I liked that Shayna tried so hard to get the ratings revised. Very authentic, I suspect I will be disappointed when looking at future reviews.
Loved this! I am a sucker for unique story formats. I really liked how the comments were worded like actual comments, such as "v" instead of typing out "very". Ultimately I think you made a great choice by using those subtle techniques but avoiding typos. Well done. This is a fun one!
Thanks K.M., you wouldn't believe how long I debated over whether it was more natural to write it 'v' or 'v.' (with the full stop for the abbreviation) 😅
Thanks Nancy! I love experimenting with the different forms that writing can take. I read "Found: An Anthology of Found Footage Horror Stories" last year and loved how we can play with the typical forms of writing to create fun and scary scenes.
This was so good. Loved the way the different perspectives built up the imagery, and there was a subtext in the tonal shift of host that left me with genuine chills.
Thanks Shawn. I'm glad that came across in the writing - I aimed for that! 💜
Fantastic! I love found footage. Mata, you did a great job capturing the reviews. I liked that Shayna tried so hard to get the ratings revised. Very authentic, I suspect I will be disappointed when looking at future reviews.
Thanks Chris - I'd love to see someone do this for real on a rental site. Its would take a bunch of organisation, but it would be so cool!
It would cool. Kinda reminds me of the banana slicer reviews on Amazon. That got traction.
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😁 That reminds me of the 'Bic Biro for women' reviews - you can probably guess how those went!
Earned a new subscriber. This was such an interesting way to tell a story and I loved the ending. Totally spooky!!!
Thanks, hope you enjoy the other tales 😁
This was so fun!!
Thank you! <3
Loved this! I am a sucker for unique story formats. I really liked how the comments were worded like actual comments, such as "v" instead of typing out "very". Ultimately I think you made a great choice by using those subtle techniques but avoiding typos. Well done. This is a fun one!
Thanks K.M., you wouldn't believe how long I debated over whether it was more natural to write it 'v' or 'v.' (with the full stop for the abbreviation) 😅
It works so great!
Love a spooky nun story.
Ghost nuns are a win every time!
A very cleaver short story- thanks for sharing.
Very cool!!!!
Thanks!
What a great idea! Enjoyed this very much. :)
Thanks Lyndsey!
This was delightful! I looooove when writers play and experiment with their creations. This one landed so well for me. Thanks for sharing!
Aww, thanks Jade! Glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for commenting <3
Fantastic stuff! A great way to tell a story. Love it! I have an idea for a novel told through various forms of writing, but one at a time eh? 🤣
No! All the things! All at the same time! 🤣🤣🔥🔥🔥🤣🤣
This is the true horror 💀🤣
i liked the idea of this. it has the bones of more story for sure but very interesting technique. thanks for posting this!
It's a lot of fun - have a go sometime! 💪
Enjoyed this, what a great format!
Thanks Nancy! I love experimenting with the different forms that writing can take. I read "Found: An Anthology of Found Footage Horror Stories" last year and loved how we can play with the typical forms of writing to create fun and scary scenes.