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Layne Mercer's avatar

Choosing these characters and this world for a microfiction story is a great idea! It does a lot of the intellectual and emotional heavy lifting, and you need shortcuts in short fiction. This particular shortcut can be abused, but you handle well•

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Mata Haggis-Burridge's avatar

Thanks, that's kind of you to say. It's the first time I've written with the characters of others - it was good fun!

Thanks also for commenting, it's always lovely to know folks are reading ❤️

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