A village corners their outcast on a clifftop, a dark tale in 1000 words.
That'll teach them!
Good work, as always, Mata!
They certainly won't be doing that again 😁
Great story of divine justice, very well conveyed.
Thank you!
Nice twist!
One itty bitty nitpick: The priest hangs walks behind and only carries his book.
Pick either hangs or walks. I'd pick walks.
Apart from that, great job!
Awesome - thank you for spotting this! I do my best to avoid typos, but they sometimes slip through, particularly when tweaking sentences.
I've fixed this and replaced it with the more meaningful verb 'struts'.
‘Struts’ is a fine word. A loaded word. Good one!
That'll teach them!
Good work, as always, Mata!
They certainly won't be doing that again 😁
Great story of divine justice, very well conveyed.
Thank you!
Nice twist!
One itty bitty nitpick: The priest hangs walks behind and only carries his book.
Pick either hangs or walks. I'd pick walks.
Apart from that, great job!
Awesome - thank you for spotting this! I do my best to avoid typos, but they sometimes slip through, particularly when tweaking sentences.
I've fixed this and replaced it with the more meaningful verb 'struts'.
‘Struts’ is a fine word. A loaded word. Good one!