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Nick Winney's avatar

very full of creeping menace. e xellent pacing.

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Mata Haggis-Burridge's avatar

Thanks!

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Hobbes's avatar

This made me want to see a Rightmove listing and photos of a haunted house: a ghostly outline in the background, objects balancing impossibly, and some estate agent "spin" applied to the more spooky features ("Perfect for the single professional - you'll never be truly alone").

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Mata Haggis-Burridge's avatar

Oooooooh... That *must* have been written by someone!

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D. C. Wilkinson's avatar

Hi Sean. Was this a nightmare? I loved all the detailed descriptions of everything. It kept me in suspense till the end. I was intrigued about the "presence" in the room. Very well written.

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Sean Corfield's avatar

I'm glad I'm reading this first thing on a sunny morning, and not last thing on a dark and cloudy night!

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Mata Haggis-Burridge's avatar

I'll have to time this more carefully in the future :D

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